Difference between revisions of "Talk:Saint Katherine College"
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The copy of this article currently reads like public relations matter. Suggestions for improving the quality of the copy include: date of college's foundation, details on administration, faculty & student body. As currently written, it is hard to determine whether the school even exists yet.--[[User:Basil|Basil]] 22:46, June 8, 2010 (UTC) | The copy of this article currently reads like public relations matter. Suggestions for improving the quality of the copy include: date of college's foundation, details on administration, faculty & student body. As currently written, it is hard to determine whether the school even exists yet.--[[User:Basil|Basil]] 22:46, June 8, 2010 (UTC) | ||
+ | : Clarification: This information (and more) should be included in the body of the article, not only in infoboxes.--[[User:Basil|Basil]] 22:55, June 8, 2010 (UTC) |
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Suggestions for improvement
The copy of this article currently reads like public relations matter. Suggestions for improving the quality of the copy include: date of college's foundation, details on administration, faculty & student body. As currently written, it is hard to determine whether the school even exists yet.--Basil 22:46, June 8, 2010 (UTC)
- Clarification: This information (and more) should be included in the body of the article, not only in infoboxes.--Basil 22:55, June 8, 2010 (UTC)